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My grave in Hell

Feb 26, 2004, 12:42:23 AM by ~confused-identity
Literature / Poetry / Old Poetry Structure / Dark

Hidden in the shadows of hate
In a well disguised hell
A fiery furious place
I hide, scared
I weep for hours in severe fright
Scared of something so close its in me
It crawls in me cutting and shredding
Making life gloomy and
Death inviting
I handle the pain though
And I struggle to fight
Like a wounded soldier
Determined to win
My pain slowly turns into hate
It’s locked in me and growing
And one day I will explode violently
Bringing the world to a halt
Then peace will rain upon mankind
And I’ll rest twitching inside my grave in hell
For ever….

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everyone
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I mixed them up I hugged my girl
and killed my teddy

I saw her kissing a sandwich
and eating my friend

She sipped his hand
and touched the wine

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and stabbed them with my car

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Current Residence: Saudi Arabia
Interests: anything i really dont know about
Favourite movie: Fight Club
Favourite band or musician: Bob Marley
Favourite genre of music: Reggae
Favourite artist: Bob Marley
Favourite poet or writer: im not much of a reader
Favourite photographer: not decided
Favourite style of art: dark, deep, symbolism
Operating System: windows xp
MP3 player of choice: dont own one
Favourite game: Grand theft auto vice city
Favourite gaming platform: Ps2
Favourite cartoon character: Homer Simpson, dexter, courage
Personal Quote: "can i have a riyal"

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~tuborg Mar 2, 2004

Thank you so much for the

~vanity-insecurity Feb 29, 2004

thanks for the fav 7abebe
welcome to DA

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~Krazy-KGE Feb 28, 2004

I'm glad your posting more and more stuff man...keep it up your work rocks!

...nice nice...

~Kinky-Kitten Feb 27, 2004

Wonderful emotion in your poetry, although it doesn't consistantly feel as such. I'd love to see some prose by you, I feel that it has the potential to blow the poetry away.

I applaud you

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~confused-identity Feb 28, 2004

hey i would like to thank you with what you think of my poetry i will try out prose sometime soon when i can again thanx for the support and i hope you enjoy my work

~ShatteredFaith Feb 27, 2004

Hey karim! Welcome to deviantart. You have some amazing work, shows alot about you...Keep on posting, you have alot of gud stuff to share, dont keep it all to yourself hehehe,
Seemi

~confused-identity Feb 26, 2004

thanxs for the support karam ur a good guy man u really areif it wasnt for u this wouldnt have ever existed

~Krazy-KGE Feb 26, 2004

your poetry is amazing man, it rocks, full of emotion, you have alota talent, your really gifted man, make use of it, im really happy that you made your own account on deviantart, your poetry should be shared with the world, its amazing, keep it up...

.....ill be back soon...so keep posting stuff

....and btw Welcome to DA!

^peskaa Feb 25, 2004

Welcome to deviantART!

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~confused-identity Feb 26, 2004

thanx for the warm welcome, hope u enjoy my work

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